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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph was born
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph is born.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Star Experience
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph comes across bottled stars.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph meets Rebekah
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph meets Rebekah.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph becomes Sultan
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph becomes Sultan.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph appoints Rebekah
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph appoints Rebekah administrator.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top" |Resheph founds Starfarer's Quay
+| style="vertical-align:text-top" |Resheph founds Starfarer's Quay.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"|Resheph heals through the first plague brought by the widened Gyre. Resheph is betrayed by Rebekah
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"|Resheph heals through the first plague brought by the widened Gyre. Rebekah betrays Resheph.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph learns the secret of the Gyre, the final plague was unleashed.
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph learns the secret of the Gyre. The final plague is unleashed.
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph closes the gates of the [[Tomb of the Eaters]], and dissolves the sultanate.
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph closes the gates of the [[Tomb of the Eaters]] and dissolves the sultanate.
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 | 2 AR (207)
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-| Resheph forgives Rebekah
+| Resheph forgives Rebekah on her deathbed.
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 | 3 AR (208)
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-| The plagues are all cleansed and Abram is taught how to grow watervine
+| Resheph cleanses the marshlands of plagues and teaches Abram how to grow watervine.
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 | style="vertical-align:text-top"|6 AR (211)
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| A statue is erected in Reseph's image, Resheph becomes known as Ghost-in-Cerulean.
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| A statue is erected in Reseph's image. Resheph becomes known as Ghost-in-Cerulean.
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 | style="vertical-align:text-top"|11 AR (216)
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-| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph dies at age 216
+| style="vertical-align:text-top"| Resheph dies at age 216.
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