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-The trembling dunes were a hidden, unfinished location found in the southwest most parasang of the map, in the salt desert. On occasion, the screen shook and the player would take damage from falling rocks.
+The trembling dunes were a hidden, unfinished location found in the southwesternmost parasang of the map, in the salt desert. On occasion, the screen shook and the player would take damage from falling rocks.
-There were always stairs down in the trembling dunes. If the player took too long to enter this area, the majority of the rooms would have caved in due to falling rocks.
-Two floors below the surface lied two now-removed creatures, the {{Favilink|graftek}} and the {{Favilink|mindrone}}, which were found nowhere else.
+There were {{Favilink|stairs down}} in each of its zones. If the player took too long to enter, the majority of the rooms would have caved in due to falling rocks.
+Two floors below the surface lay two now-removed creatures, the {{Favilink|graftek}} and the {{Favilink|mindrone}}, which were found nowhere else.
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